Letter To The School Principal

15 Ben Gurion street

Ramat Gan
November 1, 2013

Mr. Adar Arad.

School principal.

Kugel high school.

1 Mote Gur street,

Holon, Israel.

Dear Mr. Arad,

 I have recently heard that you expel from school students who disrupt the lesson, after the second warning. I would like to tell you that I don't agree with the way you punish your students, and in my letter I am going to present my reasons. 

When a student receives his punishment, suspended from school, he thinks that the punishment is too easy for him. The student enjoys a day off from school. In my opinion, this punishment is not significant enough for him and he does not care. You must punish him in a way he understands what he has done, and how wrong it is. I think that a student must be punished in order to learn a lesson and then he will not do it anymore. For example, cleaning the classes or lifting chairs in the classrooms are great ways to punish them, because they hate it, students hate staying at school until late.

In addition, I also think that if the students would be in the teacher's shoes they would understand what they had done was wrong, and they would feel very ashamed . For example, if the teacher stops her lesson, and asks the student to teach the class the material, he would be ashamed and he would not know what to do. That is also a great punishment because now, the student pays for what he has done and it embarrasses him.  

In conclusion, I recommend to use my punishments for students who disturb the teacher during the lesson.

Yours truly,

Marry Smith.

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Daphna

Talent Vs. Hard Work

The definition of success in life is different from one to another; it depends on how people consider what success in their life is. Success depends on two criterions. The first is talent and the second is hard work. In my opinion, success in life depends more on hard work.

If you're blessed with a talent, that is good for you, but you can't succeed without hard work.
Thanks to hard work you can develop life skills and overcome challenges and difficulties, that talented people can't do. Namely, talented people usually trust their talent to succeed in life and to overcome difficulties. For example, students who give an effort for a Math exam, will succeed more than the students who trust their knowledge and intelligence. It has been proven in experiments – the one who invests will get a higher grade. 

Although talent helps to succeed, without hard work it is not the same. People will appreciate themselves more if they work hard, because they will see, at the end of the day, that all the hard work was worth it and they got good results. Although the way to success is agonizing, you feel very proud in yourself and want to succeed more and more. For example, a runner who is not blessed with agility and then practices a lot, at the end of the day, will succeed more than someone that has agility but hasn't practiced.

In conclusion, hard work is the key to success and without hard work, you will keep trusting your talents and you will not be able to be successful. Even if you're blessed with a talent you must work hard in order to achieve your goals. 

Much better. Good work!
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Daphna

Reflection - All My Sons

1. The different about reading a play is that a play is more flowing, and fun to read because there are more dialogs and monolgues, and they are more interesting than just reading a story with no dialouge between the people. In addition, the dialogues and monologues taking you inside to the plot and you can understand better the thoughts, feeling and behaviors of the characters. 

2. The most interesting character in the play was Joe. If Joe wasn't there, there was no story. Joe made the plot more complicated, he was manipulated. The family's value was above all, and also, he created an interesting and surprising end.

3. Comparing and Contrasting were shown in the comparing between the couples: Sue and Jim, compared to Lydia and Frank. We saw how different they are and one couple has more  warmth and love than the other. In addition, we saw the conflict between Joe and Chris, one is more idealist and keeping on the justice's value, while to the other, the family's value is more important.  Inferring was shown in act 2, for example, Sue who talked behind the back of Chris, we can infer that she's hypocrite. And Uncovering Motives show the motives of the character to their behaviors. For example, Joe offered to Steve a job, why? Because he doesn't want hard feelings and bad relationship between the families. All these thinking skill helped me understand the character's behavior. 

Chris's Letter

December 30, 2013

Dear diary,

Yesterday, Annie came to visit here. Now, she's sleeping, and hasn’t come out from her room yet. I'm so excited she has come here. We used to write letters to each other, and finally she came. People around are talking about her visit here. Actually, I'm pretty scared from my mother's response to the fact that Annie and I are going to get married soon. My father, however, will be happy for me.

I'm in love with Annie, and I have great feelings for her, I can't keep her out of my mind, she's there all the time. I want to kiss her and tell her how much I love her, but I have something in my mind. I think about Larry, and it makes me feel guilty that I "stole" his girlfriend. What am I supposed to do? That's why, I think, my mother will not want us to get married.  Annie is so important to me, and I don't want to lose her, but the thoughts about Larry are killing me.

No matter what, I will keep fighting for our love. Since we started writing to each other, I have seen the light in her; I can see how she's a good person. I have been thinking about it a lot, maybe she's still thinking about Larry? Maybe she's with me because I remind her of him. I should stop thinking, my thoughts are foolish.

I'm still waiting for her to come out from her room, and then, we will talk in a quiet place with no interruptions. Finally, my dream comes true, to kiss her. Wish me luck!

Well done!
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Daphna

Bridging - All My Sons.

Arthur Miller is an American playwright, who was born in New York City. He's known for his successful plays. His father had a garment factory, but then, he lost everything and it changed Arthur's life. In his plays he writes about social and political issues that are often concerned with the personal response to the pressures exerted by family and society.In addition, in his plays he focuses on the responsibility a person has to take for his actions and moral corruption caused by materialism and greed.

In the play "All My Sons", Arthur's father's factory, reminds on the one hand, Frank's business, to sell suits for men. On the other hand, it reminds us of Joe's plant. Joe was used to excuse what he did and to claim that if he didn't sell the cracked cylinder heads, his factory would be closed. Also, he claims that he did it for his family because he was afraid of the fact that he wouldn’t have money to support his family.

The themes and issues that Miller writes about are related to the play. Joe excused his crimes with the fact that he did everything for his family and didn't take responsibility for his actions. However, Chris believes in social responsibility and claims that Joe must care about the society he lives in, they had conflicting views. He even thought about the option of extraditing Joe. Because Joe didn't take responsibility and only cared about his money, it led to a tragic end, to moral corruption – 21 pilots died because he sold the cracked cylinder heads. Chris, was an idealist. Chris showed us the beautiful side of the society, he showed us the justice. For example, when Chris said that he wanted to jail his father. 

In conclusion, the information helped me understand better the situations, in which each character was under pressure. It helped me to understand better the point of view of the characters and why they behaved the way the behaved, everyone had his own point of view and behaved in the way he felt. It also helped me understand how the society and family affect people.  

Well done!
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Daphna

 

A Letter Of Complaint

15 Ben Gurion

Ramat Gan, Israel
November 1, 2013

Mr.and Mrs. Eti and Gabi Rotter
The managers of Castro company
Castro Ltd.
21 Ort 

Bat Yam, Israel

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Rotter,

Recently the prices of your products have raised by more than 30%. The prices' increase is unnecessary and I would like to express my dissatisfaction with your prices.

Yesterday, I arrived to the Castro's store at the mall and I found out that the prices were more expensive than they were before, and I couldn't buy myself anything. In addition, there were barely discounts on the products. Since I'm a student and I don't work, I can't afford to buy expensive clothes, as many families who don't have any money to buy these expensive clothes. Moreover, the winters' collection is out of fashion and looks like last winter's collection. Therefore, why should I buy this collection if it already had been last winter and it is more expensive?

Since I'm not satisfied, I would like to offer some suggestions for improvement. First of all, if you want to earn more money, you should raise your production, the more you expand the output, the more you earn money. In addition, you should open more shops because Castro is a big company that is very successful and it has a great demand. I'm sure you will handle this to my satisfaction and do your best for your customers.

I look forward to your reply,

Yours truly,

Marry Smith.

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Daphna

Volunteering

Over the years we can see that students are exposed to the great idea of volunteering. Unfortunately, not all the students volunteer. Indeed, we see an increasing trend in the issue, however, there are not enough students who want to volunteer.

One day, when volunteers from the community center came to my school, they showed us the options of the groups that volunteer in the community center. The group I liked  most was the music group. And then I understood that students connect more easily to something they like. One of my suggestions is that students volunteer in groups they like because if you don't like and love what you are doing it's not worth it. You will not have any pleasure or, you will be unsatisfied. Also, if you want to have more fun in your volunteering you should have some friends that are close to you.

In addition, students that volunteer are given great respect from the school on their volunteering. They are given a certificate of appreciation from the school, therefore, it's one of the things that makes students want to volunteer. It's important to give feedback to the students because then, they do more and that appreciation motivates to volunteer. In my school, every year there is an event that measures academic achievements but also volunteering accomplishments. Students enjoy the satisfaction of volunteering, but also the appreciation from the school because they contribute to their community. 

To conclude, volunteering is beneficial for students, because students can make new friends and contacts. Also, it increases their social and relationship skills and it gives a sense of satisfaction and accomplishment.

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Daphna