Money Stolen.

September 29, 2012

Dear diary,

Yesterday and today were the most tiring days in my life. I worked very hard,

 for a show for teenagers with cancer. Yesterday was terrible, however, then,
it began to be better.

I have sold many tickets for the show until 11 am yesterday. I kept the money in a
plastic bag and put it on the shelf. Then, I continued to sell tickets and when I came
back, I saw the money wasn't there. I started to panic, someone stole it from me.
My mom saw that I was crying. Therefore, she replaced the missing money.

After the money was stolen, I had to go to practise with my band for the show.
The day I have been expecting all year, came. Before I went on the stage,
I had butterflies in my stomach. Then, I went on the stage and started singing my songs.
All the crowd applauded. At the end of the day the thief was found, it was my brother,

who  gave the money to the band director.

At the end of the day, I was happy beacuse everything worked out.
I am also happy that I did a good deed for the teenagers, and also my environment:
my mother, my brother and the people who contributed the money for the show.
Excellent
(100)
Daphna

Equality Of All

Eliot wrote a poem called "Count That Day Lost", that seems very extreme.

She says in that poem that if you do not do a good deed, even one, your day is wasted. I am going to explain how the information adds to my understanding of the poem.

First of all, Eloit used the male pen name because female writers were not appreciated at all.

Furthermore, the society at that time was divided into classes and nobody was equal to each other. Eliot wanted the society to improve, therefore, she wrote the poem,which tells what  a day well spent is for her and what a wasted day is for her. She mentions that the upper classes have to help the lower classes. 
We understand that between the lines, because we know what the
poet's background is.

In addition, it is also well known that Eliot was a critic that critisized the soicety at that time,

therefore, the poem is very extreme. Eliot wanted everybody to change, she wanted everybody to be equal , then she wrote that everyone have to do at least one good deed. Eliot criticized the upper classes who maybe enjoyed the luxuries, so they thought only about themselves and did not help the lower classes.

In conclusion, Eliot criticized the society to improve their behavior.

In addition, she wanted everybody to be equal,
beacuse the upper class did not help  the lower class.